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How Long Has It Been... by ~sakua1807:iconsakua1807:



Mikan's POV

I was sitting by the window, staring out the cold, heavy rain. Your face had crossed my mind again. I felt hot, fat tears form in my eyes. I remembered your death clearly. Too clearly that it had to hurt a lot. How long has it been, Natsume? How long...

Flashback


Bang

A car accident has happened. Our car bumped to a truck and caused our car to tumble around. The impact was hard. I looked at him. His eyes were half-opened. His blood was sliding down his head.

"Mikan..." he said so tenderly as if he was okay. I can't bear looking at him like that. Tears that I held back started to flow. "I love you." he continued with a smile.

His words lingered in my head.

"I love you too Natsume." As I said this, a bigger smile formed in his face.

"Smile and live for me, Mikan." I just nodded.

"Don't go... Onegai," I pleaded. His eyes were closed. But he mumbled something,

"Aishiteru," it was faint yet audible. It was sad yet tender.

"Natsume!" I cried. I started to cry even more. He's dead. The one I love is dead. I felt a thousand needles pricking my fragile heart.


End Of Flashback

"Mommy!" a little boy called out. I turned my head to the side to see who it was.

"Hai, Natsume?" I asked. I named him after Natsume because they looked the same. He, our son, has crimson eyes and raven-black hair. But his eyes weren't as cold as his. He came up to me and hugged me.

"I love you Mommy,"

"I love you too..." 'Natsume...' I continued in my thought.
©2008-2009 ~sakua1807
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Author's Comments

sad story about Mikan and Natsume.. D: I'm so bad!! D: okay.. this is the first time I ever did something like this.. Is it bad? Tell me, onegai. :D arigato!

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:iconcristymasashi52764:
WOOW!! i like it!! XD
its so sad....
but so cute!!!!! XD
:iconkirari-chan:
zomg... i love it!! :heart: i don't know gakuen alice pero the story is :love:!! i like the ending and how the "i love you... natsume" had a double meaning! :D :love: :love: :love:

:clap: hontou ni sugoi desu sara-chan! ^^

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the endless dream~
:iconsakua1807:
Thank you! :) I know!! It's so sad... This is the first fanfic that I made which was sad... D:

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I'd rather sacrifice my life than to see the ones that are important to me suffer..

Nastume x Mikan forever!! :D
:iconsakua1807:
thank you for the comment and fave pau-chan!! :D

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I'd rather sacrifice my life than to see the ones that are important to me suffer..

Nastume x Mikan forever!! :D
:iconkirari-chan:
:hug: you deserve it. ^^

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the endless dream~
:iconsakua1807:
:) :glomp:

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I'd rather sacrifice my life than to see the ones that are important to me suffer..

Nastume x Mikan forever!! :D
:iconcristymasashi52764:
lol i seee. welll its good!! ^_^
:iconshinylavender:
:cry: :cries: :crying: :cry: :clap:

That was SO sad!!!! :crying: You write SO well!!! :clap: :clap: The way you describe the emotions really touched me!!! :cry: The ending was also a nice touch!!! :#1: Natsume:heart:Mikan FOREVER!!!

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Bringing only the Insight the Inside brings~
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:D

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I'd rather sacrifice my life than to see the ones that are important to me suffer..

Nastume x Mikan forever!! :D

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